Telling Tales

This page was added mostly because the Stories page was getting too long and Face started a chapter-story-in-the-comments fad, so you can leave a story in the comments and I’ll correct any mistakes, then put it on this page. I don’t care what rating.

Face’s Story

Chapter 1

There once was a group of mutants called “ ” who had joined together, seeing how powerful they could be. One day they sat in wait for the radio to announce a fire or a robbery.

“There is a robbery in process at-” The radio had no time to finish. Rakoon had shut it off. He already knew where the robbers were. They jumped into action!

* * * * * * * * * *
They had arrived at the scene. The robbers had guns, and were pointing them in the air. Everyone in the building had their hands up. That is, everyone other than John. John was only two years old. Two of the guns were pointed at him. Nobody knew the mutants were there. Rakoon knew that they were about to shoot John. Magneta knew too. Magneta dived in front of him, right as the gun fired. She fell to the ground. Liquo sprayed all of them, to break the guns. Gunpowder was everywhere. Fangz ran over and became a snake. One by one, she almost choked each robber, to make them pass out. It worked. Rakoon got his phone and called the police. They were there in an instant. They put the robbers in the police car, and thanked Rakoon. “Nice job, Fangz!” Rakoon said, turning around to her. “ Fangz?” She was gone.

CHAPTER 2

WHERE IS FANGZ?

They started a search for Fangz. They had searched the whole state, but she wasn’t anywhere. They walked back to the Hideout. They all sat down to make a plan of what to do about the missing member. Rakoon had an idea.

“ Maybe we can get some kind of dog to hunt her down?” He said.

“ No, I have a cat that can do better than a dog,” Conztrictor said, pulling a picture of her kitten, Charlie, out of her wallet. They decided that this would work. Conztrictor went home and picked up her furry boy. She went back to the hideout with her kitten. When they were ready, Conztrictor put a leash on Charlie and they headed out to find Fangz.

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After an hour of following the cat they had arrived at a jail. Thinking that he was wrong, they left. But Conztrictor believed in her kitten. She went into the jail cell and asked if they had seen her. They hadn’t seen her, but Conztrictor was sure that her furry boy was right. She went to the hideout and explained her plan to the others.

“ I think that since Charlie took us to that jail, we should check other jails. Charlie doesn’t go by smell of the person, he goes by where he suspects they are. He knew what the situation was.” They agreed that they should look. They headed out to every jail.

CHAPTER 3 CHARLIE’S SECRET

They had checked every jail and Conztrictor was found. They decided to make Charlie a member of the “ “ along with them. Conztrictor went home and went to bed. She thought she heard a robber, but it was just her kitty playing with the phone. She smiled at him, and went back to bed. The next day, Charlie got his name in the group. He went from Charlie to Clawz. It was a great honor for such a young kitty. Later that day, some robber burst in through the door!

One yelled, “ EVERYONE PUT YOUR HANDS UP OR THIS KITTY HERE WILL BE SWISS FUR!” Not on my watch! Thought Clawz. He jumped onto a cabinet. He jumped down and did a flip in the air. He landed on the Robber who had yelled. He was on his head. He swung down and looked him right in the eye. A smile spread across the smart cat’s face. Razor sharp claws popped out of his paws.

“DROP THE GUN OR GET A PAIR OF SWISS EYES!” He said to the robber. His gun dropped to the floor. A different robber was about to grab him when Fangz became a snake. She slid under the gun before it hit the ground. She became human again and carried it back. She held the gun up to the robbers. That’s when all the robbers pulled out spare guns. We’re toast. Thought Rakoon. Clawz Looked at the robbers. Their guns slowly floated up to the ceiling. The robbers looked up at their guns. The guns shot down and smacked them in their faces. Clawz smiled at his work. The robbers were about to pick up their guns to leave.

“I don’t think so…” Said Clawz. He put his claw out and held it up. They dropped the guns and left.

“You saved us,” said Rakoon. “ I didn’t even know you could do things like that! It was amazing!”

That night they had a special meal just for Clawz. They had fish; Clawz’s favorite food, and instead of him eating on the floor, he sat at the table. This wasn’t just any dinner, this was the first dinner that the team had ever had together.

CHAPTER 4 FISH GALORE!

After a few weeks, everyone had heard of the heroic kitty. They all invited him to have dinner at their house. He always agreed, just to be polite. Day after day, for weeks this went on.

Face’s Original Story (Unedited)

There once was a group of mutants called “ ” who had joined together, seeing how powerful they could be. One day they sat in wait for the radio to announce a fire or a robbery. “There is a robbery in process at-” The radio had no time to finish. Rakoon had shut it off. He already knew where the robbers were. They jumped into action!

* * * * * * * * * *
They had arrived at the scene. The robbers had guns, and were pointing them in the air. Everyone in the building had their hands up. That is, everyone other than John. John was only two years old. Two of the guns were pointed at him. Nobody knew the mutants were there. Rakoon knew that they were about to shoot John. Magneta knew too. Magneta dived in front of him, right as the gun fired. She fell to the ground. Liquo sprayed all of them, to break the guns. Gunpowder was everywhere. Fangz ran over and became a snake. One by one, she almost choked each robber, to make them pass out. It worked. Rakoon got his phone and called the police. They were there in an instant. They put the robbers in the police car, and thanked Rakoon. “Nice job, Fangz!” Rakoon said, turning around to her. “ Fangz?” She was gone.

CHAPTER 2

WHERE IS FANGZ?

They started a search for Fangz. They had searched the whole state, but she wasn’t anywhere. They walked back to the Hideout. They all sat down to make a plan of what to do about the missing member. Rakoon had an idea. “ Maybe we can get some kind of dog to hunt her down?” He said. “ No, I have a cat that can do better than a dog.” Conztrictor said, pulling a picture of her kitten, Charlie out of her wallet. They decided that this would work. Conztrictor went home and picked up her furry boy. She went back to the hideout with her kitten. When they were ready, Conztrictor put a leash on Charlie and they headed out to find Fangz.

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

After an hour of following the cat they had arrived at a jail. Thinking that he was wrong, they left, But Conztrictor believed in her kitten. She went into the jail cell and asked if they had seen her. They hadn’t seen her, but Conztrictor was sure that her furry boy was right. She went to the hideout and explained her plan to the others. “ I think that since Charlie took us to that jail, we should check other jails. Charlie doesn’t go by smell of the person, he goes by where he suspects they are. He knew what the situation was.” They agreed that they should look. They headed out to every jail.

CHAPTER 3 CHARLIE’S SECRET

They had checked every jail and Conztrictor was found. They decided to make Charlie a member of the “ “ along with them. Conztrictor went home and went to bed. She thought she heard a robber, but it was just her kitty playing with the phone. She smiled at him, and went back to bed. The next day, Charlie got his name in the group He went from Charlie to Clawz. It was a great honor for such a young kitty. Later that day, some robber burst in through the door! One yelled, “ EVERYONE PUT YOUR HANDS UP OR THIS KITTY HERE WITH BE SWISS FUR!” Not on my watch! Thought Clawz. He jumped onto a cabinet. He jumped down and did a flip in the air. He landed on the Robber who had yelled. He was on his head. He swung down and looked him right in the eye. A smile spread across the smart cat’s face. Razor sharp claws popped out of his paws. “ DROP THE GUN OR GET A PAIR OF SWISS EYES!” He said to the robber. His gun dropped to the floor. A different robber was about to grab in when Fangz became a snake. She slid under the gun before it hit the ground. She became human again and carried it back. She held the gun up to the robbers. That’s when all the robbers pulled out spare guns. We’re toast. Thought Rakoon. Clawz Looked at the robbers. Their guns slowly floated up to the ceiling. The robbers looked up at their guns. The guns shot down and smacked them in their faces. Clawz smiled at his work. The robbers were about to pick up their guns to leave. “ I don’t think so…” Said Clawz. He put his claw out and held it up. They dropped the guns and left. “ You saved us!’ said Rakoon. “ I didn’t even know you could do things like that! It was amazing!”

That night they had a special meal just for Clawz. They had fish; Clawz’s favorite food, and instead of him eating on the floor, he sat at the table. This wasn’t just any dinner, this was the first dinner that the team had ever had together.

CHAPER 4 FISH GALORE!

After a few weeks, everyone had heard of the heroic kitty. They all invited him to have dinner at their house. He always agreed, just to be polite. Day after day, for weeks this went on.

Hug’s Story

Hug’s story was too long for WP, so it was put on Quizilla. Click here to view his story: http://quizilla.teennick.com/stories/15807582/demons-chapter-1-hunting-progress 

5 responses

6 12 2009
trickbear

Oh wait thats not my story anymore I deleted it so can you delete my story I am working on a new one

7 12 2009
Jelly Donut

wish granted

29 12 2009
trickbear

O O I CAN WISH!! I WISH A HAD A AIR SOFT BB GUN RIFFLE!

15 12 2009
trickbear

Okay I making a new one Its long so this is the URl to it http://quizilla.teennick.com/stories/15807582/demons-chapter-1-hunting-progress you pick a chapter by chapter and yeah

12 03 2010
face113

o.O nobody told me it was posted. I wrote that a while ago…. if it’s dumb that’s why

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